In many countries, sports has been one of the most important aspects to make the country known in international events. Government takes several initiatives to encourage participation of people in sports and spends money for training of sportsman for this recognition. In regard to this, several people believe that government should not spend a lot of money on training individuals in sport events, rather spent on things that would benefit general public. In my opinion, equal amount should be invested in sports and people well-being instead of spending maximum in one area.
There are many people in the country who are good in sports and would like to come forward to play for representing the country. To support this, government arranges competitions at various levels to select best players for participating internationally on behalf of the country. Once the selection is made ,government spends a lot of money on their development and training. This training would help them in competing with other country players at international sport events. Training expenditure is necessary because this will enable players to train themselves well enough to be able to win and make the country famous in the field of sports.
However, there should be a control on the expenditure made on sport trainings. If most of the money is spent by the government on sports, there will be shortage of funds for the citizens and their benefit. Government will face difficulty in funding for development of roads, railways and other operational costs. This may even lead to many accidents causing deaths. It has been observed that many government hospitals lack quality equipments and facilities which can be arranged by using these funds. To add with, some money can also be used in the maintenance of our heritage structures to promote tourism.
To conclude, government should utilize their funds wisely so that no sector is neglected. By doing this, sports and public welfare will be taken care of proportionately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the country. To support this, government arranges competitions at various levels ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, in my opinion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89385555963 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6473673371 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42961030129 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134510296562 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105045147956 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259470707118 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896608079509 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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