Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with the admission of my son Rahul Agarwal in your esteemed institution in the seventh grade. It will be indeed a great opportunity for my son to be a part of Holy School and under your guidance.
We are currently residing at Pune and will be shifting to Mumbai next month. My son was studying at St. Peters in Pune where he cleared his sixth grade and scored 85%. He has been a regular participant in school elocution as well as dramatics for four years. Besides academics, he has also excelled in other extra-curricular activities. He has won two silver medals in Sports for the past two years and is a State-level chess player. His main interest is Sports, but he also enjoys doing Mathematics.
I feel that Holy School is the best platform for my son to excel academically. I am sure you will decide what is best for Rahul.
I will look forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Krina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... will decide what is best for Rahul. I will look forward to your kind reply. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74739306749 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3922276248 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173730156291 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680271823724 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498685084557 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112263665663 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474983257631 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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