In spite of the advances made in agricuture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

In spite of the advances made in agricuture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Why is this the case?

What can be done about this problem?

It is true, that many people are to suffer form hunger in all countries. In agriculture sector, to much technology available but lack of resources, natural disasters, lack of knowledge etc. That's why some crops are damage due to this we have lack of cereals. That's why people are face hunger.

First of all, this situation happens in only one reason that country is an underdevelopment due to this unevenly food supplies form distributors. That country cannot face any natural trouble because they have lack of technology, and they have not any financial support from the government due to these researchers cannot find any new medicine for crops. Like, Africa one of the poorest country, they have not technology. So, crops are growing very barely exist. Nowadays, farmers are facing many types of insects molest, and they have not any toxin to save crops. Moreover, climate change is also one of the bads cursed for farmers and geographical problem is also aggravate. For instance, flood, famine, etc.,
this types of issues is mainly damage crops.

On the other hand, Some country is richer in crops as well as they have good technology to control all situation
in agriculture. For example, India has rich harvest of crops, Indian farmers have heavy crops of wheat and India have also defense technology for agriculture. So, some countries are need to develop agriculture area for protect crops. What is more, solution is the best way to manage this problem. Some countries who is developed. They are come to tackle this types of problem.

In addition, Developed countries also help to poor country to provide technology, farmers training and share knowledge for agriculture due to this world can tackle this hunger problem and people have a good food source. Climate change is depend on nature, but we can try to tackle that problem. Otherwise, it will impact the whole world in a negative way.

To sum up, it is true that people are facing hunger problem and agriculture area are also face natural effect, but the thing is how to tackle that problem and now most of the countries are focusing in this area and provide more knowledge and financial support to farmers due to this we will definitely protect our agriculture area to face this types of problem.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...n all countries. In agriculture sector, to much technology available but lack of ...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...tural disasters, lack of knowledge etc. Thats why some crops are damage due to this ...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ge due to this we have lack of cereals. Thats why people are face hunger. First of...
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Line 11, column 77, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'aggravated'.
Suggestion: aggravated
...armers and geographical problem is also aggravate. For instance, flood, famine, etc., th...
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Line 12, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'damaged'.
Suggestion: damaged
..., etc., this types of issues is mainly damage crops. On the other hand, Some count...
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Line 16, column 6, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'defensed'.
Suggestion: defensed
...avy crops of wheat and India have also defense technology for agriculture. So, some co...
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Line 22, column 1, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... a good food source. Climate change is depend on nature, but we can try to tackle tha...
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Line 22, column 100, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...herwise, it will impact the whole world in a negative way. To sum up, it is true that people a...
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Line 24, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...r problem and agriculture area are also face natural effect, but the thing is how t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, it is true, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01302083333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55218829504 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450520833333 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5584862315 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175937980243 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615888158046 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620484887733 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069326968358 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722381619714 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, it is true, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments