In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, we can see different type of health problems, which are very fatal. This type of diseases are spread by some bad habit of human especially, they like to eat to much fastfood due to this, they suffering obesity and other type of health problems.
Firstly, some people are like to eat at restaurant, hotels etc., which are very dangerous place. They want some tasty dishes, that’s why they went there but that food are very oily and fatty, which is not good for our health, then that are reduce our immunity system abilities and it is also affect our part of body. So, I think in this government do to increase tax then it is become as expensive. It would be good result for local people.
Secondly, I agree with government steps, infect, government do some harsh step to control this situation. When some research of result, they said that obesity, which is main problem in the world and that people, who is suffering obesity disease, they are also to suffering some pain problem, like, back pain, lag pain, etc. That is only basic problem but nowadays some danger virus are also traveling to the air, which are very crucial situation for us. For example, Corona pandemic, which is very fatal disease, all world governments are come together and find to solution about this problem. So, I think this types of disease are came from to fastfood, which is sell from that seller openly. If government impose a higher tax, so, I think that country people are not buy that food, which is become as an expensive.
In addition, some people are suffering from heart disease, fastfood are very harmful for them, it is create some disaster situation. At that moment, government create some rules for seller to use of oil in all type of food. Moreover, government develop community to check food quality of that shop and then give permission for sell.
All in all, nowadays fastfood is on trend, some people have fond to eat this type of food. However, it is create some danger situation for local people of that nation. Whereas, government create some rules and regulations. So, I think, it is very fruitful for that nation people as well as nation too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...t of human especially, they like to eat to much fastfood due to this, they sufferi...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... not good for our health, then that are reduce our immunity system abilities and it is...
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...mmunity system abilities and it is also affect our part of body. So, I think in this g...
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Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
.... So, I think this types of disease are came from to fastfood, which is sell from th...
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Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...e not buy that food, which is become as an expensive. In addition, some people are sufferin...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...stfood are very harmful for them, it is create some disaster situation. At that moment...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: FOR_SELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for sale'?
Suggestion: for sale
...y of that shop and then give permission for sell. All in all, nowadays fastfood is on t...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...o eat this type of food. However, it is create some danger situation for local people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70899470899 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33059023632 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5840123061 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6842105263 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333085078824 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111365024167 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514441637847 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191040994396 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050164244687 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.