Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The way we communicate these days has become the fastest communication till now in the history. Perhaps, I agree with the statement that there is no need to communicate through the letter as it was in olden times. It has been believed that why to go through the technique which takes days to delivered rather than to use a modern technique which delivers information in just a click.
In olden times, people use to write letters and then wait for days to get back the reply from the receiver. It was fully a manual thing where humans only deliver human’s information. As we look at the whole process than firstly, sender writes the letter and submit it to the post-box or post office. Secondly, the letters were transferred as per the regions. Thirdly, postman will deliver the letters from the region office to the receiver’s house. Finally, the process is vice versa from receiver’s house to sender.
On the other hand, nowadays it just takes milli-seconds to transfer information from one place to another. In addition, no matter what continent the receiver is situated, it still takes the same time to receive. Recently, many applications are launched in the market which can do this process easily. For instance, WhatsApp, Facebook, Hike, etcetera. Furthermore, these applications provide features like voice call and video calls to communicate with anyone at anytime and anywhere. The only thing these types of applications need is a smart device with the internet.
The ways to communicate is depend on the individual but, I believe that it would be the better option for the human to use the modern technologies rather than vintage one. I think that everybody should get updated as per the world is updating. This change can make things work faster and safer as this application provides end-to-end encryption transactions where only sender and receiver can look up to the messages for the safety of the confidential conversations.
To conclude, the use of letters for communication should not be necessary in this modern growing world as it is very slow process with compare to the latest virtual messengers. Perhaps, it’s the person’s choice to use it or not in a way or conveyance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...just a click. In olden times, people use to write letters and then wait for days...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...versa from receiver’s house to sender. On the other hand, nowadays it just take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0027100271 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82669727122 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539295392954 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7395416071 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184612942698 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524921561535 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465515918856 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103593223391 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199926612172 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.