Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
This is a fact that modernization and technology has made everything faster. Many individuals think that writing letters is an outdated mode of communication and in these days innovative ways of communicating are used by majority of people. While i believe that now automation has provide more instant ways of sending and receiving messages, the importance of letters can not be overlooked which are still preferred by some departments.
On the one hand, there are effecting methods of communication among people that has provided by the technology. Firstly, in this contemporary era most of the people are occupied with cell phones as well as internet and wifi services as masses can not imagine their lives without portable devices that allows them to contact other people in case of emergency. Therefore, people can make calls on mobiles immediately nowadays instead of wasting time on composing letters. Secondly, numerous platforms are available for people that are cost -effective such as WhatsApp, facebook, instagram, twitter as well as text messaging. Most importantly, it does not only allows individuals to write messages electronically but also share pictures, documents and video clips. That is why, instead of creating gap in communication by letter writing, these applications and social websites are used by everyone. Finally, the technical advancements have emerged in every sector of life such as health care, education, business and commerce as all these fields require an effective two way communication for the smooth running of the activities.
On the other hand, despite of having various attractive options still some individuals rely on writing letters. First of all, many government departments accept official letters from other authorities rather than communicating electronically as this seems more formal than sending message on smart phones. Moreover, they can protect their privacy in this way because posting things online may be misused by public. Besides this, youngsters are exposed to technology and can use application in a better way than senior citizens as they depend upon writing letters and are not familiar with automation and using computers and tablets.
To conclude, although people can choose any mode of communication as per their interest and tastes in this materialistic world, a few individuals still prefer to write physical letters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g are used by majority of people. While i believe that now automation has provide...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...While i believe that now automation has provide more instant ways of sending and receiv...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
...ing. Most importantly, it does not only allows individuals to write messages electroni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47567567568 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98885683114 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597297297297 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6043904867 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.066666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126857841628 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437055942545 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269001660972 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843402124202 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123669682533 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.