Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for part-time position at your museum located near broad way in New York city. I came across this advertisement in newspaper that you are looking for to do unpaid work as I studied paleontology was excited about this opportunity.
There are several reasons why I want to do voluntary work. First, I want people in our community to learn and take interest in education. Now a days, people spend most of their time in front of idiot box aka television. Second, I do not have any past experience of professional world as I am recent graduate. Having voluntary experience, it will be great for my resume.
As I have graduated with degree in paleontology, I would be most suitable person for this job. Being avid reader, I have read most of the books and done extensive research on various topics which will help me in this job. Moreover, I am people’s person and can communicate with people on various topics.
I am available in evening from Monday to Friday from 5pm to 8pm and in morning on Saturday from 10am to 2pm.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,
Ross Geller
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...o learn and take interest in education. Now a days, people spend most of their time in fro...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...arn and take interest in education. Now a days, people spend most of their time in fro...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...a television. Second, I do not have any past experience of professional world as I am recent gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61881188119 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67938884741 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5474482876 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7692307692 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294642848372 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867870889036 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972087358396 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130062516304 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127813314054 0.0580467560999 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.