Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary era, food producing companies focuses on making products taste sweet without thinking of its after effects to make more profit. This has plethora of malefic effects on humankind which is being neglected the this process so some suggested to make prices high for sugary goods. However, I strongly degree with suggestion as that will not help to solve problem but rectify it. There are myriad of reasons for my phenomenon and this essay will pinpoint as well as elucidate promising reasons in ensuing paragraphs.
Expounding on first and foremost belief behind my argument is that human nature. People has misunderstanding that if something is expensive then that must be good so I should buy it. Moreover, people are not prone to changes and that will help manufacturers to make more profit that will attract other companies to follow the same trend. Furthermore, that will generate bigger impact on society as now with the increasing number of desultory products in market. For instance, I read an articles few days ago about research occurred in Canada that surveyed 1000 people on this. One of the question was to buy cold drinks at increased price, to everyone’s shock, majority of people answer with yes.
Pondering on second school of thought, I think some people my argue saying imposing price hike will discourage consumers from making purchase. But on contrary, it will help goods producers. In case that is successful then it will affect company as well as country economically as company goes bankrupt and people lose their jobs. Alternative approach, by offering some other form of incentives such as insurance discounts if on routine check up everything is normal due to their healthier lifestyle. Additionally, focus on educating people about drawbacks of consuming sugary products as well as teaching them to read ingredient facts on products before making purchase which will help them to become smart shoppers.
To summarize and recapitulate from aforementioned deliberation, it is quite conspicuous that increasing price is not viable solutions. There are other panaceas such as educating people or enticing offer from insurance or government will help making a better place to live beautiful and healthier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...s on humankind which is being neglected the this process so some suggested to make price...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an article' or simply 'articles'?
Suggestion: an article; articles
...roducts in market. For instance, I read an articles few days ago about research occurred in...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... from insurance or government will help making a better place to live beautiful and he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, as to, for instance, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24099722992 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81847481956 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598337950139 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0825320987 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.294117647 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133628225535 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408485323877 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406503420858 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777542594073 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371286858203 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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