In contemporary era, cellphones have become so popular that people can do almost everything with one device located in their pockets. As people have started using apple pay and google pay, paying for items using mobile is not that fancy feature anymore. We will elucidate both merits and demerits of it in ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, pondering on current affair of Covid-19, mobile pay offers contact-less payment option and keeps you safe and healthy. For example, recently I went for grocery shopping and completed my payment contact-free with the help of NFC(near field communication) chip. Secondly, people like me who loves to jog in fresh air will say that it is quite frustrating for them to have wallet with them. Moreover, most of the people on their way back home from jogging will stop for coffee, having convenience of paying by phone is great for them. Nevertheless, they always carry their phones with them for listening music.
Moreover, humans tend to forget things and their debit card pin is no different. When one spend hours in shopping and at the cash register if they don’t remember their pin and need to leave empty hand is bit disappointing. Although, it is less likely to possible but when one is old this might happen. Last but not the least, people like me always misplace their wallet or forget it at their house. For example, last week when I went for coffee at Starbucks, I forgot my wallet, luckily I have signed up for Apple Pay and could complete my transaction without any hurdle. Thus, if we have convenience of paying with mobile pay is better, even as a backup plan.
As each coin has two sides, though, there are many exceptional facilities of paying with phone, there are several issues, too. As I mentioned previously, NFC chip can be triggered via any other NFC devices and if any person with bad motive comes near this NFC enabled mobile then they can hack into it and get all information of victim. Also, in case your device get stolen, they will get access to all your bank details.
To wrap up, it is quite conspicuous that there are many advantage of paying by phone such as contact-less payment, no need to keep wallet all the time or remembering pins. In my opinion there are more merits than demerits and I think this is the future and we are going in correct direction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...eir pin and need to leave empty hand is bit disappointing. Although, it is less lik...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
... it is quite conspicuous that there are many advantage of paying by phone such as contact-less...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71882640587 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48960752634 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569682151589 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7521458096 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.578947368 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228083513503 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673073788419 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568676276243 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126921246909 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385435851748 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.