It is an obvious truth that music can have crucial impact on our daily life. In fact, playing variety of musics is common in community life. Some people strongly believe in the positive aspects of music, while there are some people who oppose to music. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial topic.
On the one hand, some people proclaim, music has a great deal of benefits for people and society. First and foremost, expressing feelings through different kinds of musics become possible. Secondary, it can be named as a most significant entertainment among folk especially youth. In other words, spare times can be filled by listening to musics and sometimes it can change the mood of people to the best.
On the other hand, some people tend to be against the benefits of music and reckon, it not only lack of any positive points but also contribute to catastrophic impact on society. A reason which convince them to reject music is because of coming up some new musics which are included of offensive words. So, antisocial massages can be transferred through them. In other words, catastrophic impacts can be created in case of not having an appropriate music. Another reason to reject music is wasting time. In their point of view, devoting any time to music is considered useless.
In conclusion, there are different ideas about music. Some people advocate, while others disadvocate. However, it has some negative points, I tend to agree with folk who are in favor of music, because it makes more sense to me. Also, every coin has two sides, it is recommended to see the bright side. At last, if i had to choose between listening to music and other kinds of hobbies, I definitely selected music.
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...f hobbies, I definitely selected music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 937.175257732 154% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86824324324 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56944943482 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5941211157 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8421052632 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363967434314 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12020118203 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610368568558 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239994257082 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136608691009 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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