The view that women are better parents than men has shown itself to be true throughout the history. Also, they have the most important role in growing children. While, some people proclaime that the role of men are as crucial as women and can not be neglected. In my perspective, in order to have the best children the existance of both mothers and fathers are so significant, although, the role of women because of having some features seem more vital.
Firstly, women are more pateint in comparison to men that is considered as the critical factor. So, they can deal better with children that has the best impact upon their character. For example, if my nephew do some thing wrong her mother try to teach him right from wrong but her father is the first body who punish her.
In addition, it has been scientifically proven that women are better in communicating than men. In other words, they are capable of being in touch with their children in every situation a part from it's hardness. For instance, it is true about me. What I am trying to say is, in case of being in a tough situation the only one I perefer to speak with is my mother because she underestands me very well and is pretty good at talking.
Thirdly, children learn caring from their mothers rather than their fathers. IF we notice the playing of children, we will underestand, it is a girl who always have the caring role by doing some duties like breastfeeding or giving bath.
In conclusion, based on the above mentioned points, unless, we take care about the role of men as well as females, we will not have the best children but women play very more important role in than men in raising children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...character. For example, if my nephew do some thing wrong her mother try to teach him right...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to care'.
Suggestion: to care
...at talking. Thirdly, children learn caring from their mothers rather than their fa...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like breastfeeding or giving bath. In conclusion, based on the above mentio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60132890365 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48097806309 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9833175752 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332741383991 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122048806428 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853567722752 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185423469936 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976534998853 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.