Writing task 2 (an essay)In some countries many parents are interested in home schooling and the trend is gaining popularity. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Believe it or not, in some places, majority of parents are in favour of home schooling more than private or state schools. As a matter of fact, this attitude is becoming more popular among people by passing time. This essay deals with the argument for and against this interesting topic.

On the one hand, having home schooling is associated with a variety of merits. First and foremost, by home schooling, families have more control on their children. It becomes possible for families to manage every thing from near without being worry about numerous things. For example, it is not farfetched for students to get affected by their classmates and learn some offensives. Another positive point is related to time and energy saving, which are so crucial in order to have better performance in educating. In other words, the time and energy which is supposed to be spent on commuting from home to school can be devoted to something more important including doing homework or extra works such as playing a music or doing sports. That is why, the supporters of this trend are becoming more in number.

On the other hand, opponents argue that, the benefits of going to school are more than school homing and benefit people more and more. The most important reason is because of being in contact with other pupils that not only is going to assist students to be more social but also, they can share their problems in lessons. Therefore, it can lead to making progress in education. The other advantages that can be taken from going to school is being in contact with tutors, who can have a crucial role on solving different issues related to curriculum of lessons. So, the advantages of that cannot be neglected and must be considered.

In conclusion, people have different ideas about whether going to schools or having home schooling. Adapt on the above mentioned points, the benefit of going to school because of being more social, that has a significant impact on the future life of students and being more in touch with teachers, outweigh the drawbacks and I highly recommend it.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he drawbacks and I highly recommend it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86516853933 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47225482785 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8397476642 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151581485881 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558494756797 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046497665897 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108497118565 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525168315056 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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