One of your colleagues recently got a new job at another company. Write a letter to him/her and say
– how you feel about him/her
– what you enjoyed the most while working together, and
– ask what his/her plans are.
Dear Mr. john
I am writing to congratulate you on a new job opportunity you grabbed at another prestigious organization. Even though I will miss you, I am very happy for you and wish you fulfill your professional dreams ahead.
It has been two good years working with you at this company. You have been very helpful to me in the workplace. The one thing that I like most about you is your jolly nature, due to which everyone loves to be around you. The stress of workload just veins away whenever I used to work with you.
Also, I would like to ask you about your further plans regarding your professional growth. Would you be working with your new company for the long term or you have plans to join any multinational company. You know what, I also planning to work with some big companies.
Wish you luck,
Yours faithfully
Bal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ganization. Even though I will miss you, I am very happy for you and wish you ful...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59210526316 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5331254167 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9141541158 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302580860928 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135710195291 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442791171012 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217296954709 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265906197668 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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