ou recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Editor,
I am writing to inquire some information about an article that you have published on your magazine. Regarding to the last version that is broadcasted on 20th of Jun, a text has been written about a talented woman, who has overcome troubles and she is introduced as a prosperous individual.
Honestly, she is one of my close friends that I have missed her for ages. Since they immigrated to another country (Canada), which is mentioned in her biography, we could not get in touch with each other. As technology had not been developed sufficiently, we only are able to connect by letter that was return when they move to another location. Although I searched her in various social networks like Facebook and Tweeter, I could not aware of her.
Your fascinating article has inspired me to find her. I would appreciate, if you could allow me to access her detailed address. I promise I do not want to abuse the address, for that reason I will email you a common picture of our childhood, which is taken around 20 years ago.
I am waiting to hearing your kind reply.
Sincerely yours
Soulmaz
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., which is taken around 20 years ago. I am waiting to hearing your kind reply. ...
^
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... kind reply. Sincerely yours Soulmaz
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72164948454 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66974483128 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675257731959 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5297897777 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235578683456 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868638509007 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721733545176 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118216804782 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369931252028 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.