The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not work

Essay topics:

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about rubbish collection procedure in our area, which has not been done correctly for several months.
Since particular advertisement has been announced at TV about collecting garbage at 9:00 pm, all individuals in our neighborhood put them out before the mentioned time. Although the trashes are filled, they are not unloaded every night. In addition, the garbage was not vacuumed accurately and I have found some rubbish around the trash. Therefore disgusting smell spreads around which is annoying for all residents. Moreover, several feral cats and dogs are attracted that may injure our kids or hurt them.
I ask you to register some intense rules about gathering rubbish in our street and employ some qualified labor to perform it correctly. They should be noticed that this work in related to people's health and should be done carefully.
I would appreciate if you could follow the problem and solve it. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need more detail. Our exact address is attached in this email.
Sincerely Yours
Sam.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ve found some rubbish around the trash. Therefore disgusting smell spreads around which i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...be noticed that this work in related to peoples health and should be done carefully. ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09497206704 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60097716991 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9338049647 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178608411017 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056061651259 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455369532138 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946910759628 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425354799289 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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