The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
This writing is the common pledge by the local residents of the surrey. The reason is for the disappointment about the heap of garbage prevailing on the side roads.
Firstly,with the increase in rate of household garbage and other public waste has caused a worrying challenge.Because of the inconvenient timings of local garbage contractors. Due to irregularity of collectors, tons of waste thrown outside as there is no chance of keeping it at home for a long duration.
Secondly, due to the insufficient garbage bins for the organic and recyclable waste, a mix of waste often taken out on the pavements and sideof the roads which has caused ill effects of disease such as diarrhea , typhoid and so on. The children are the main targets and they mostly play outside for entertainment. Moreover, a number of people have been transferred tothe hospital who were having breathing problems.
Lastly, I would suggest you that there is an urgent need of garbage collector regularly twice a week as well as scrutinized by the local officials.The pragmatic approach taen by local officials would make city keep clean and green. I shall look forward towards the favorable response. Yours faithfuly, jasmeen kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Yours faithfuly, jasmeen kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10891089109 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97276661672 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683168316832 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.166206571 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 4.34317383033 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180567548092 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617654961906 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383758979919 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102627082033 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298600411273 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.