Nowadays courses and general study online are getting very popular. However, some people still prefer attending classes in person. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Evolving technology has made life, work and education easier. A handful of people of people think that distance electronic learning is a convenient and time-saving process. At the same time, some oppose its better to become civilize through attending educational academy. However, I believe that former is in vogue in these common days and much more beneficiary than the later opinion which we will discuss in the following paragraphs.
On a comforting process, internet is a versatile tool used for different means. Besides, greatest proportion of age group are more attractive towards the electronic books, free online courses or face to face conversations, lectures, seminars from the other side of a world. Perhaps, this is possible is owing to the services provided through WiFi which make it happen to study. For instance, a number of students download study materials from the web which is available in profound and doesn't take much time to load it into the computers hard drive. Likely, students need not to join the classes they can attend it online as well as carry out it through the medium of mobile phones, gadgets and gigs. Moreover, 90 % of completion of school assignments and projects are achievable using the particular websites. Lastly, the important factor is that millions of people who cannot commute to the far distant places with low fee structure can avail varied free online courses for their further studies. Also, e-books are vivid and colorful and generate a flourishing future to the online readers.
Despite their benefits there are ample of drawbacks, at the same time studying online materials doesn't offer identical physicality and tangibility as a real books. For examples, it requires high-speed internet connection, qualitative audio system, headphones and an electronic gadget to study. Hence, sometime we need to wait for online teachers for a couple of days for a lessons and coaching. Overall, it may led to eye strain for prolong hours of study on a visual display. Contrarily, due to these reasons people prefer to opt colleges,schools, and coaching centers. Millennial , spend reasonable amount for taking admissions in these education center as they generally provides full satisfaction and guaranteed knowledge. Therefore, education gainer sit in the classes so that if they get exacerbate at any point the lecturer can solve this at the same time.
To pen down, with the changing world people become obsessive internet users in regards to study or searching for their perspective courses which are cost-effective, technology savvy, enhance the skills through connecting to the global teachers via online world due to lack of its physicality and not a quick problem solver make it unpopular to huge people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27210884354 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83356769476 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9667372507 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150431134756 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389097615658 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278617301052 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885128464627 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151571976579 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.