It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?
History is a study of past events, particularly of humans. I think museums are the most approachable way through which people become aware of the ancient process. However, the cost and expenditure to keep and its opening hours are becoming difficult. There seem to be two main causes of this, and several possible solutions, as we will explain here.
Perhaps the main cause is the lack of investment or funding for infrastructure. The exorbitant cost for maintenance and preserving the vast antiques and ancient models, maps, giant framed pictures and so on. This means value of this expenditure and preservation is incurred through the visitors. A further cause seems to be the overcrowding in cities, whereby people damages the public property while visiting either by the children or profession. Moreover, the photographers click the pictures and explore the authenticity of past event to outer world. Thus, it leads to lost of interest in these particular buildings to watch it lively. That means that an already stretched system, is often pushed to a critical point, causing cancellations and immediate rise in price of tickets in museums.
Regarding potential solutions, probably the main remedy would be to encourage investment in better development of these art institutions, for example through subsidies or public private partnerships. Besides, the people should respect the valuable resources gathered by these bodies by not providing any harm also prohibiting the camera inside the museums. Another solution is government should give help to maximize longer hours so that department of the museum will be less worried as well as welcome many of the visitors with reasonable prices. This enhance the network and fosters a sense of civic pride, to everyone's benefit.
To pen down, it seems that outdated infrastructure and overcrowding are the key factors behind the plummeted prices frustrations. Possible solutions would involve better funding, and also innovations in ways of working and imposing restrictions on visitors to cut the burden on the system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38957055215 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96014177177 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6432704457 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.352941176 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175935029062 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438471890461 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516071303704 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976630585145 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486618143847 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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