It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?
In this contemporary world, museums are losing its charm. Though from being cultural rich to displaying art and history, museums provide us lot of knowledge in different genres but people still find it boring and pointless to visit museums. However, it has become immensely costly to maintain its popularity and keep them running for the people. In my opinion, with some measures taken by the authorities we can keep the museums running smooth for the public.
With the increase in use of internet these days, people have the access to all the information related to any given topic such as culture, religion, history or any form of art. Since people find it very monotonous to visit the museum just to see few pictures or information which is easily available on internet, this has led to the major decline in number of visitors visiting museums. Less visitors means less revenue generated leaving it very difficult for the museum authorities to keep it operational for the public.
However, this problem can be tackled with few proactive measures taken by the authorities. Firstly, some activities could be added for the visitors to keep them occupied for longer period. For example, in art museum some painting workshops can be arranged for kids and adults who have the interest in drawing and painting. This would be an added attraction. Similarly, some events can be organised to promote the museums. Having a small cafe or some food stalls with souvenir shops can gain popularity and help visitors to plan a day outs with families.
To conclude, I totally agree to the fact that museums are losing its charm but with several events and few activities happening, people would love to spend their valuable time and money in visiting museums with their families which in turn would help museums to regain its popularity.
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Suggestion: Fewer
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Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, still, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54518943006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0752507221 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24447320455 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951990471753 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590992254441 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145298514442 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574869293782 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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