Some people believe that to become successful in sports one should have a natural talent Others think that perseverance and practice are a crucial part to success Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?

It is considered that environment has been degraded to an exponential rate with a rise in pollution and trash problem. As a result, it is creating a chaos in the human life most significantly through land deterioration with a heap of garbage and varied type of trash in the every part of the countries. Thus, prevention is taken through stringent actions taken by government and education campaigns.

To begin with the problems and its causes to humans, with the tremendous growth of people buying and throwing things has led to increase in rubbish. Ultimately, it defiles the surroundings as people often put garbage on the side roads or overload the trash bins. Consequently, it creates an unpleasant smell and dangerous insects fly over these piles. It is often unbearable to the elderly people and children. This is life threatening to the human health.

Another reason is that disposable plastic cups or plates are most commonly used every day in various things. Also, companies produce a tonnes of paper waste every single day. Thus, it has created demand and supply in the economy.

The solutions to this terrible situation can be initiated through the government imposing restrictions on mega factories to less produce of waste as well as individuals to avoid use of plastic. At the same time, if masses are educated with the dangers of this hazard then they can prevent themselves from any perilous situation.

To recapitulate, the various categorized waste pollute society more significantly than any other pollution. So, care should be taken to save the lives of people through the imparting of education by the government as well as drop in the policy of throw and use culture.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tonne' or simply 'tonnes'?
Suggestion: a tonne; tonnes
...various things. Also, companies produce a tonnes of paper waste every single day. Thus, ...
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Line 11, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion by the government as well as drop in the policy of throw and use culture. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, then, thus, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11513157895 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81829197392 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0755893337 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0413046134333 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0133716582776 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178808552511 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0219261306835 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205295856975 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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