You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in express to the disappointment faced by the team members of the meeting, which held a couple of weeks ago in your prestigious civic hotel. Let me elaborate in details.
To be more specific, the reviews to the menu of a hotel was given 5 star. So i had decided to choose hotel along the informational presentation with a collaboration of clients of the company. At the beginning, they were astonished with the interior decoration of the sitting availability as well as stationary provided by the hotel staff for the help notes. Also, they were quite impressed with the pleasant sound system which enabled them to listen conveniently especially to the back sitters.
In the middle, when there was a round to get some lunch break they were long-faced with the catering services. At first. the food was stale and was underrated. As, the contract signed for the catering of three dishes and providing them round table service of eating the lunch. Besides, they were forced to eat while stand up. All these had put me in sorrow as two of the coworkers met with food poisoning due to the unpleasant food offered with a basic standard despite of guaranteed special menu.
At the end, I far as I am concerned I shall suggest you to the enhance the standard of your menu. Likewise, food should be checked and scrutinized under the food staff.
I shall look forward towards the favorable changes towards the menu of your hotel in the next meeting.
Yours faithfully,
Jasmeen kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, likewise, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79087452471 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70190219699 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0807800817 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265440820372 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764776769258 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361190655011 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12295335412 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510889658251 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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