ou recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to give you the feedback that we receive from the participants who attended the meeting, which took place at Grant Haytt Hotel on Monday, 30th of November of this month.
To begin with, Most of the Participants appreciated the hospitality of the hotel. They found the auditorium spacious and the setting was comfortable. Some employees liked the location also.
Conversely, there were few people, who were unhappy with the quality of food served by the hotel. According to their views, the food was not cooked properly. There was a lack of varieties of food items. Furthermore, Few options of food were available for Non-vegetarians.
There are a few changes that need to be incorporated to improve the food in the future irrespective of the place of meeting.
Firstly, Assign the duty to one person to take care of the food quality. Secondly, Distribute the forms to the participants to know their food preferences. Last but not least, ensure that the food is cooked properly.
I hope will consider thee suggestion cited above. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Joe Barnes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...able. Some employees liked the location also. Conversely, there were few people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18617021277 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84589878286 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6057467197 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5333333333 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282451270916 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073748514557 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516367223322 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109435468423 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073580538694 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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