You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.Write a letter to t

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You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:

• Say what the participants like about the hotel

• explain why they were unhappy about the food

• suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.

Dear sir/Madam

I am writing you regarding to a meeting which was organized in your hotel early last week for the employees of the “Talent” company. According the feedback given by the guests, all of them like your hotel amenities, particularly the building with tastefully decorated of as well as the good reception and the quality of transfer provided.

However, notwithstanding the fact that all of our colleagues have given positive opinions about the high quality of hotel, they were entirely disappointed about the meals. In fact, all the guests were certainly dissatisfied with the quality of food that was served for lunch. Therefore, these meats and breads with poor quality that were eaten by the guests led to several health problems such as food poisoning and indigestion for them.

Taking into consideration the mentioned above, we would appreciate it if you apply a better control on your kitchen and the process of cooking. I also recommend you to buy fresh food Ingredients which are provided by the local hypermarket.

I hope that at the result of these changes, discontentment is replaced by satisfaction in our next visit.

Yours faithfully

Mans

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23560209424 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0415829211 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.883551394 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.111111111 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 4.34317383033 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335076947282 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112117624645 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710931186631 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149773465957 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948757280525 0.0580467560999 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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