You visited a restaurant for a meal. You were served meat (non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal. You are very annoyed at this incident. Complain to the restaurant manager for the same.In your letter•explain your annoying experience•describe the unprofe

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You visited a restaurant for a meal. You were served meat (non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal. You are very annoyed at this incident. Complain to the restaurant manager for the same.

In your letter

•explain your annoying experience

•describe the unprofessional attitude of the staff member

To whom it may concern.

I am writing to notify you of a claim about poor quality meal against your restaurant. Besides, I am disappointed concerning your attendant’s rude when dealing with the client’s request. It is hurting your business.

I have ordered a dish of vegetarian in your restaurant early last week. But, once the waiter was served me, I understand that is not my order. He has brought me red meat rather than dish of vegetarian. I thought that your restaurant at least manage to check my order and apologize me. However, I was shocked when I saw the restaurants’ staff members insisted that they made no mistake and were not held responsible. This situation is compounded by the fact that they suggested me to refer this problem to the restaurant manager. This situation is seriously causing me considerable anxiety. Unless you take prompt action to rectify this problem in any way you can, I will be forced to take legal action regarding your restaurant’s refusal to honor the law and apologize me. I hope we can work something out to our mutual benefit.

Your earliest response will be appreciated.

Faithfully yours,

Mans Sh

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04188481675 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12284244754 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680628272251 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6746112927 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7857142857 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234416132507 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686746660115 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593836250361 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988920020648 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755559592128 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.