Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently; you should
Write about
a) Explain the content of letter
b) why you need translated report
c) why do you need it urgently.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to request you concerning translating my letter that I am compelled to send to a big company in the San Francisco that work in nutrition industry. Actually, my letter’s content is a job requesting for a human resources vocation. Another documents that should be translated to English language is including identification card, my high school evidence and educational certificates. From social perspective, this opportunity can be a decisive factor in one’s success. It is interesting to note that, in the first step I serve as an apprentice that I think I can completely benefit from this opportunity. Furthermore, I would very appreciate if you consider my ultimate deadline for sending these documents is 23 of August and I just have one week to collect these documents.
I would be most grateful if you would submit the translated report as soon as possible to the address listed in the envelope.
Yours Faithfully
Mansoureh Sheikh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to request you concerning t...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...content is a job requesting for a human resources vocation. Another documents that should...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23532745638 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0943326234 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186024469832 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685972989039 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650903465422 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165234728489 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226630458521 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.