It has been proven that smoking kills. In some countries, it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is undeniable that smoking jeopardizes human life, and that cigarette consumption is banned in most public places in a number of countries. I firmly agree that this rule should be applied in all countries and I will support my opinion with compelling arguments.
To begin with, smoking in public places undoubtedly harms other people’s health and violates their rights who do not consume cigarette actively. It means that passive smokers, children in particular, are innocent at the mercy of smokers’ selfish behavior. Take children who suffer from pulmonary diseases such as asthma as an instance, by being exposed to toxic cigarette smoke in the community, they would be more likely to experience an asthmatic attack and their illness would be exacerbated leading to a fatal situation. As a result, this is against the basic principles of an egalitarian society in which everyone should have the same rights.
Furthermore, banning cigarette consumption in public places can reduce the overall rate of smoking in the society as a whole. Research findings confirm that in some countries such as Singapore which have introduced some strict laws to deter people from smoking in the public, the proportion of cigarette consumption is considerably lower than in other countries. Once people have few options to smoke, they would be compelled to resort to decreasing the number of cigarettes they consume and even give up smoking altogether. Therefore, this rule can bring about some advantages for smokers in the long run.
In conclusion, given the fact that making it illegal for people to smoke in public places can benefit not only nonsmokers but also smokers themselves. This rule should be adopted in all countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26618705036 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84647858764 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571942446043 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8539228479 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277295977231 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108577861199 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593396694971 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196352754004 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693824394155 0.056905535591 122% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.