Some people are convinced that mature age employees are beneficial to a company. Others think that younger employees contribute more and hence are more beneficial to a company. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Over the past decades, on of the highly debatable issue whether the companies should employ younger workforce or older ones. Some people believe that mature age employee are useful for companies while, others think that young people more contributes and are beneficial to a company. Therefore, to understand why there are such conflicting opinions, we must look at the facts in favor of each arguments.
On the one hand, the supporters of younger employees put forward some compelling reasons to justify their point of view. They argue that young jobholders who are more energetic and they like challenges in work. Secondly, they not only are familiar with new technologies but also they utilize these to companies where they work it. According to the studies in Australia, fresher members in firms are more team players as compared to experienced person. Plus, they have great versatility and creativity. Indeed, if the younger employees can exert their potential and advantages of their age, they will be success in their career and fallow on their companies.
On the other hand, some researchers agree on the point that the mature jobholders' experience influence companies. Moreover, experienced employee know how to control stressful and unforeseen circumstances. Also, it is highly unlikely that this group of employees would take a hasty decision so the work problems easily is tackled. Studies are amply illustrated that in successful and famous companies, mature employees always have conveyed their experience and knowledge to younger ones.
To conclude, there are convincing arguments on both sides. I think it is an undeniable fact that each company needs the wisdom and experience of mature employees and energy, talent, technical knowledge of fresher ones. Furthermore, the younger jobholders share equal importance just as mature employees in a company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41296928328 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79683201737 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0682256096 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307343713765 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933094105275 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11238040914 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187309392537 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699369930054 0.056905535591 123% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.