Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

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Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

The issue of whether or not teenagers should be advised by elderly people has grown in important over the past few decades. While some people are of the opinion that teenage benefit from consultation of old people, others believe that this group of people can violate old one’s opinions. Admittedly, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy which will be elaborated in this essay followed by a reasonable conclusion.

On the one hand, we cannot deny the fact that since senior people’ life is full of experience, therefore, they should undertake all great responsibilities about their children and teenagers. In fact, the best teacher for learning all valuable life skills and should spend long hours talking with teenage. From a social perspective, most young people are oblivious to the detrimental effects of making mistakes on their future lives. Thus, grandparents should raise young adult’s awareness about the consequences of failing to recognize of all walks of life. From an economical standpoint, for instance, a young businessman who are deprived of skilled people advices are more likely to suffer from financial threats as opposed to one who try benefit from experienced businessman.

On the other hand, in the today's competitive world, not purely following the aged-people' saying can play an indispensable role in every young individual’s accomplishment. It has also become socially acceptable that everyone has own life and the own right of independence. Therefore, they should experience the living that may is better from their opinion. In the past, for example, marriage at an early age had been accepted as a tradition and individuals developed a sense of satisfaction. But nowadays this custom is outdated. In now modern world, not only young people will not accept that get married early, but also they feel fulfilled that stay single forever.

In conclusion, I believe that both views have their merits. While, it seems the old sayings should be taken into consideration as valuable information resources by youths, but youth are willing to challenge the old customs, and in turn, own experience of life is of paramount for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not teenagers should be advised by elderly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28285714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99207251904 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608571428571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0939315746 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291007508028 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831687428826 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086420415629 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179844705869 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903805894909 0.056905535591 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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