Some people believe that to become successful in sports one should have a natural talent. Others think that perseverance and practice are a crucial part to success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports perception regarding passion or hard work has always been a controversial issue. The world stands polarized into two contrasting perspectives where expertise is the key notion to success with numerous contradicted issues, Whilst it by no means clear that person's years of hardship is worthwhile for a victory as we will see.
Elucidating in detail, the history had players who won the matches with their skills and powers they had since from their birth. Besides, sportspeople who have an aptitude and ability vehemently become recognized in the world. Needless to say, no one can replace the inside power and strength of the person with any other thing. Evidently, Kapil dev is public figure for his talent and passion for the cricket. Although, he practice in the sports field but his touch to the sport is god gifted for which most of his success is through his features. Furthermore, sportsperson sustaining the credentials of nature gift and passion needs less time for implementations.
Striking on the opposite side of the spectrum, we have to as whether this is a practical proposition. It is universal truth that anything in this world could be achievable through prolonged hours and years of execution. Moreover, In the society people take part in academies,courses,coaching and competitions to enhance their abilities for success. Additionally, it take time to have an establishment of exact methods and techniques. Equally, It is rare in some cases that luckiest people are accomplished and have on the ball. Unfortunately, for the common people way to success is only though practice from dusk to dawn. Ultimately, it is significant to have an influential knowledge and practice of the particular thing to become a winner in the global eyes and not inherited skills which are void of apprehension directly leads towards being famous.
To sum up, apart from the various benefits of acquired talents without any hard work and source of information, a success is vital only through the dark hour utilization of process and methods as well as involvement in years of regular techniques.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, as well as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16008695837 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0804808893 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192720284706 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580813551067 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384736145191 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099633314827 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511193597892 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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