the growing of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing.
do you AGREE OR DISAGREE?
In this contemporary settings, the advancements in technology has led to many inventions such as internet, wi-fi and infinite. Whilst, one of the most popular widespread technique used by millennial via web is the sale and purchase of goods and services. Some people opine that soon there will be terminations of physical locations and stores for purchasing things as needs are met through one click of the figure on the internet websites. However other holds an opposite view. So, with disappearance of physical stores people will become obese, often cheated with purchases as well as exaggerated rates of shipping costs. Hence, I firmly disagree with the over expansion of online stores outweighing the disclosure of local stores.
On the one hand, youngsters play a detrimental role in excessive use of websites for buying commodities. With the free subscriptions, newsletters, discounts,updates and clearances respectively sale increase strategies of multinational companies earn high revenues through such techniques of influencing the fresh blood mind. Moreover, the private companies often use various marketing tools through internet by reducing prices of merchandise. As a result, reduced price is preferred by everyone and consumers can grab this opportunity and add the item to their shopping carts. Consequently, upon adding the billing information they are often charged with so many taxes such as g.s.t, central tax, local tax etc as well as exorbitant shipping charges. Contrarily, local shops do not advertise and emphasis plummeted taxes and shipping costs. Mainly, bargaining is the key essentials of the physical shops which cannot be sacrificed with online shops. Additionally, things purchased their size, texture and color relatively different from the visuals shown by the manufacturer of various parties. Few number of people are often cheated with irregular sizes and quality. Whereas, in shops there is full and 100 % satisfaction of things we bargain and have a physical touch.
On the other hand, sitting at one place and ordering each utility,household items and things will be vague. Needless to say, shops need commuting outside having window shopping, roaming in new fashion outlets and an entertainment with friends and families in outlet malls. In contrast, to online shops this is unimaginable. It will lead to obesity in people due to void of travelling, less interactions as well as no negotiations. In future, closures of shop will wholly make customer to pay substantial price for shipping for a list of things for so many every member of the society. As a result, it will led to increase in price of modes of transportation and traffic jams.
I pen down by saying that, if people will boycott use of shops then it will make them release of their disposable income in high alarming rate in from of shipping cost,taxes and packaging costs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...h alarming rate in from of shipping cost,taxes and packaging costs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30131004367 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02966538145 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578602620087 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9005147861 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.565217391 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9130434783 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17724167036 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527840690586 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486235168445 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113638586716 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385207479215 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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