The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
Now a days,shopping became a habbit of spending one's leisure time.The growth of online shopping may lead to closing of all shops in cities and towns as people are showing much interest on shopping through internet.I agree with this and my views can broadly explained in the following essay.
However,online shopping made life so relaxing by purchasing required things from home.It also saves time of an individual in these busy days.For example,one need to go to thier work at early hours and can't predict the time when they come back to home.So they are not able to spend their time for window shopping.In that case obviously one will go for online shopping.In these days,some online websites are also providing a chance to exchange the product if the customer is not satisfied.So people are showing much interest on online shopping.
Certainly,there are also people who enjoy window shopping that is going to shops and purchase the things what they wish.Mainly women dont get compromise on the accessories or sarree they want to purchase.For example,they decide to have a sarree with particular design and different pattern such people can't get satisfied with online shopping untill they see the quality or colour directly. This kind of people help to increase the business of shops.
After having considered all the points that i have discussed above we can draw a conclusion that,Online shopping has reduced our work and saves much time but it brought some loss to shops in cities or towns.But this can be reduced if the shop persons introduce some schemes or discounts on products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09125475285 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74510495403 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.110661637 49.4020404114 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.8 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279366748664 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152230723938 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127807515173 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188436842497 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116174250936 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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