MONEY AND TIME
Q: earning more money and having less time OR having more time and less money. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Money and time are the two most precious subjects in everyone's life. Both should be tackled very efficiently. Both my views are explained in the following passage, before stating my opinion.
On one hand, there are individuals who want to earn more and more money when they were young and energetic. Here, people with this mentality will be with a thought that they have less time to earn sufficient money in order to reach their requirements. Firstly, as technology and modern methods have been developed people are rushing to their work as if they have no time to do their regular activities even. Secondly, as one has responsibilities of their families they have no option than to work hard and earn more to give them a luxurious life. Also, to make their wishes come true. Additionally, if they have higher income they can be very relaxed about their kids school fees and also for any medical urgencies.
On the other hand, there are people who do much hard work for whole time even though they cannot earn more money. In this case, one will think like if he would have more time, they can spend some amount of time for their personal usage. For example, if one has more money in their pockets even though, they do not have a single person to tap their shoulder during their depression times. At this point of time, there will be no use if your lockers are filled with money. Indirectly, having time for themselves will develop relationships among families and also friends.
After having considered all the above mentioned points, we can finally draw a conclusion that one can earn more money when they have much strength to work hard. At the same time, they should have some time for themselves.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76254180602 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38502578708 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1395240614 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385639982723 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139483054804 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678111767461 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252785082515 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421864704525 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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