MONEY AND TIMEQ: earning more money and having less time OR having more time and less money. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Essay topics: MONEY AND TIME
Q: earning more money and having less time OR having more time and less money. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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People have different views about the relationship between time and money. While some argue that it would be better to have more money than time, it seems to me that owning more free time would be more beneficial.

There are various reasons why people believe that maximizing earning money is top-priority. Firstly, people might claim that they only have one stage of a lifetime in which they are able to build their wealth; therefore, they should rush to achieve. Those who are in working ages ranged from twenty to forty tend to devote their youth to jobs and career promotion. They make a great effort to earn money for purchase things that bring about a sense of success and facilitate their life such as houses, cars, technology products. Secondly, it is a common thought that more money can bring about senses of happiness as well as peace of mind. For instance, a stable and high finance could ensure a life without worrying about education fees or medical service expense.

In spite of these arguments, I believe that people should have more time dedicating for taking part in social activities and tightening both family and social relationships which could enrich ones’ life in many ways. What would happen if one who is full of money in the pocket but find no friend to appease when getting depressed. Furthermore, this kind of time plays a key role in balancing people’s life. Instead of pursuing continuously money, it is also vital to take times to adopt a hobby in which people are able to escape themselves from work, release pressure of making money.

In conclusion, although it seems to be reasonable to work hard for money all the time, I personally prefer the idea of having more free time to money.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84899328859 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49866637101 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1436768732 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374586904433 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137936865928 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115417286642 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279136785968 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112507317445 0.056905535591 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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