Study abroad
It is true that there is an increasing number of people who choose to study abroad instead of studying in their domestic country in recent years. While many people believe that there are many reasons for studying abroad, such as the cheaper costs or better education. I think that the most important reason is that they will have greater career prospects in the future.
At the outset, there is a myriad of reasons why international students will have lots of professional opportunities, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that people who graduated from universities abroad can land a job in many multinational corporations. Most international students use English the main language to communicate when study abroad, this will help them able to get on well in multiple corporations where employees from many countries around the world. As an illustration, a Chinese with an educational attainment from a recognized USA university could have more opportunities to have a dream position in a foreign company located in China than those who do not have. Therefore, studying abroad indeed brings students competitive career opportunities.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that owning an international qualification would bring career promotion opportunities. In the shortlist of candidates selected for the higher job title, people with the internationally educational background would be more outstanding. For instance, people who studied abroad and returned their hometown are likely to have more offer in higher level and opportunities that help them move up the career ladder than others. Thus, it seems to be advantageous for these to pursue a successful career.
In conclusion, the trend of the study in a foreign country has increased in recent years. In my opinion, the key factor that influences people who desire study abroad is they could obtain a lot of achievements in their career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ring career promotion opportunities. In the shortlist of candidates selected for the higher j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31921824104 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1108804993 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5003065187 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.615384615 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326514135426 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144669899697 0.0925447433944 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13661369196 0.071462118173 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245397693818 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975007621036 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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