Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Despite living in a house is more attractive for some groups, others prefer to stay in an apartment. I believe that a house has some special characters which is not found in any apartment. This issue will be analysis in this assay.
Although living style has altered and apartments have become as a main place for living, the benefits of house are undeniable. Foremost the principal property of these places is spacious area. Approximately, every houses is equipped with a wide backyard, where provides a beloved place for family gathering particularly in a sunny day with a barbeque. Furthermore, individuals feel more privacy in house and it reduces annoying disturbance of neighbors. For example, I used to live in an apartment that I haven’t concentrate on my work or study, due to loud music voices of neighbors.
However, selecting apartment as a living place provides some welfare as well, which is convinced people to choose it for residency. The original feature is security. Since almost every apartment is secured by guards who have responsibility to protect who are living in the complex, the range of stealing may be declined. Moreover, this point should be mentioned that having a number of people around us, expand the opportunity to make friends. For instance, every meetings that take place monthly in apartments is a great occasion to know others find someone who are in common with you, that may lead to friendship.
All in all, I suppose that residency in a house aids us to maintain our traditions and a spacious house prepare the opportunity to gathering for family members, which is going to miss these days.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i suppose

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99270072993 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86918885031 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8902861981 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30256081215 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100002125681 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109610648292 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17686813002 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097525689689 0.056905535591 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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