On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle to claim insurance of a valuable item which I lost while travelling from China to Japan. Let me explain the incident.
To elucidate I have lost a wristwatch which I had inherited was from my grandfather. The speciality about the watch was that it had a golden rug and straps. The expensive wristwatch was of great sentimental value to me as it was carried from one generation to another for nearly three decades in my family. Although I can't remember exactly where I lost the watch however I believe while boarding the plane the wristwatch was stolen by some co-passenger. Furthermore, I tried to register my complaint with the lost and found the department of the airline on arrival at Japan airport, however, they too have failed miserably in location the watch.
Lastly, the only good thing which has happened is that the watch was covered by your insurance which provided full coverage on damage as well as theft. Hence I request you to inquire into the matter and provide full reimbursement of the watch. I am also attaching the insurance coverage document for your reference which will allow you to process the claim faster.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle to claim insur...
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Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... three decades in my family. Although I cant remember exactly where I lost the watch...
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Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ll coverage on damage as well as theft. Hence I request you to inquire into the matte...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to your response. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, lastly, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89523809524 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70482897301 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7557263874 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226794709574 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762103802295 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602880215946 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128076947761 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580353662085 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.