On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to tell you about a valuable item lost while I was on a holiday to Bali in Indonesia . I had taken a comprehensive travel insurance policy to cover any loss during my trip.
I had carried my new business laptop for urgent work related issues.While changing flights at Bangkok airport, in a rush to board my fight, I forgot my laptop bag at gate C-21. I was seated near the information desk at gate. I had packed my laptop in an olive green and white stripped american tourist bag. The laptop is Apple Mac Pro with 14 inches of screen and costed the company approximately USD 1,400.
I have attached the receipts of the purchase of the laptop, some pictures of me with the bag at Paris Airport where I boarded the flight, boarding pass, all insurance related documents and police complaint at Bali airport. I would request the insurance company to reimburse me the market value of the laptop at the earliest. Please let me know if you need any other documents or proofs of loss. Looking forward for your coöperation.
Yours sincerely,
Samy Fernandes
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...s laptop for urgent work related issues.While changing flights at Bangkok airport, in...
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...the laptop, some pictures of me with the bag at Paris Airport where I boarded the...
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...he laptop at the earliest. Please let me know if you need any other documents or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69430051813 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62751127415 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6081330635 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172436069924 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644689821319 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079743530994 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1456522451 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134516122156 0.0580467560999 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.