On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter Describe the item lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

Describe the item lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir / Madam,
First of all, I would like to wish you a great day and I hope this letter finds you in good health.

I am writing this letter to you in order to inform you that during my last holiday in Thailand I lost my cell phone. The phone is brand new iPhone 7 gold, which has HD camera, and the memory is more than 128 gigabyte. Unfortunately, I bought it from 2 months, and it cost me 1000 USD.

Seemingly, while I was packing my clothes, the taxi arrived to take me to the airport and I was in a hurry to catch my plane so I forgot the phone in the hotel room.

According to the contract that I have with your esteemed company, the cell phone is fully covered, since I have bought a premium travel insurance package. Accordingly, please provide me with both the required documents and the standard procedures for the claims.

Thank you in advance and I look forward to receiving your feedback soon.

Yours Faithfully,
Paula

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gigabyte' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'gigabytes'.
Suggestion: gigabytes
...camera, and the memory is more than 128 gigabyte. Unfortunately, I bought it from 2 mont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, look, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46285714286 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44409998603 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4088318843 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238666257018 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830576003935 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789185290284 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109146720006 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059297275754 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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