On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Mr. Andrie,
I am Mitul Gandhi, a travel policy holder of National Insurance company. I am writing this letter to report you my lost item during my holiday.
I am a International Marketing professional and used to travel frequently to various countries. I was travelling from Dubai to Mexico last week to attend the customer meeting but at the exit gate I realized that my laptop bag was missing. It was black coloured laptop of DELL company kept in red colored bag. The model number and serial number of laptop is AA777 and K-012243 respectively. I suppose, other co-passenger might have collected it unknowingly. It was newly purchased laptop for presentation with customers.
I have already lodge my complain with airport authorities but so far i have not heard them back but fortunately i had taken travel insurance policy of your company which covers lost item of insurer. View of above, i would like to claim for my lost belonging. I am hereby enclosing purchased tax invoice of laptop for amount $1500 along with copy of insurance policy for your kind perusal. It is my request you to kindly authorize the claim at earliest possible so that it does not affect my work for a longer period.
In anticipation for your positive and prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mitul Gandhi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Mr. Andrie, I am Mitul Gandhi, a travel policy holde...
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...you my lost item during my holiday. I am a International Marketing professio...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y lost item during my holiday. I am a International Marketing profession...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...t item during my holiday. I am a International Marketing professional an...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...arketing professional and used to travel frequently to various countries. I was t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ravel frequently to various countries. I was travelling from Dubai to Mexico las...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...knowingly. It was newly purchased laptop for presentation with customers. I ha...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lodged'.
Suggestion: lodged
...ation with customers. I have already lodge my complain with airport authorities bu...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...rs lost item of insurer. View of above, i would like to claim for my lost belongi...
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Line 7, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...not affect my work for a longer period. In anticipation for your positive and pr...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ion for your positive and prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Mitul Gandhi
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nd prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Mitul Gandhi
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... Yours faithfully, Mitul Gandhi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77763723244 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4699173245 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236794560888 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704262770345 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904135980418 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116503443813 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125061153654 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.