On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insura

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
 describe the item you lost
 explain how you lost it
 tell the insurance company what you want them to do

Dear Sir,
I am writing this to inform you that I have lost my mobile phone during my vacation to Goa. It is a Samsung Galaxy9 mobile which costs around 30000. However, I thought it will be a happiest trip but, on the before day of my return that is on 21st January, I have lost my phone which is present for me from my parents. As I have insurance coverage for the mobile phone from your company. I hope you can get me the insurance money.
I went on a vacation to Goa during 15 January to 22 January. While, eating food in a restaurant and went to wash my hand. In between, kept my phone on table when I was back I could not find it. I have registered a complaint in nearby police station.
I hold insurance for my mobile phone, I would claim the money for my lost phone. As per the rules of insurance coverage, I claim the amount of 25000 for the phone I have Lost. Please find the invoice and the FIR copy for the lost mobile phone with this letter.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Abc.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to inform you that I h...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...nd 30000. However, I thought it will be a happiest trip but, on the before day of...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d a complaint in nearby police station. I hold insurance for my mobile phone, I ...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Abc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19402985075 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23536496203 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8333178295 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2142857143 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231718634037 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913213315032 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688321509359 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141872036239 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774242318705 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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