On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunely you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- describe what you lost
-explain how you lost it
- Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
To
Claim Department,
New India Insurance Company,
Delhi
I am writing to you in regard to the claiming settlement for my laptop which I have lost in my last visit to Dubai.My trip was insured under the "Travel Insurance 213" in your company.
My laptop is of Lenovo brand with model no AE43H and serial no. LEN342322. Its 14-inch laptop with a grey outer body. This laptop is inside a backpack with a logo of the company on its front.
This incident occured when I was having my city Tour. This tour was organized by the XYZ Travel Company.This tour started early 11:00 AM and ended up at 5:00 PM. We went to different tourist places during the tour and we were with a group of other 30 tourists. It was later in the evening when I realized that my laptop bag went missing somewhere during the day tour.
I am certainly not aware of the amount of the amount I am eligible for this incident, however, I am attaching few supporting documents for claim redress. I am enclosing herewith my insurance certificate, a copy of travel documents and purchase invoice of the laptop which I lost. You can reach me on the below mentioned contact details in case if you need any more information.
Request you to do the needful at the earliest for continued patronage.
Thanks
Sarthi Mistry
Sarthimistry@gmail.com
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nued patronage. Thanks Sarthi Mistry Sarthimistry@gmail.com
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84893218767 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2339831934 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1538461538 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168355731067 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518458880227 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767154863526 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879092989265 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836663497252 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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