A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
• explain what you are currently doing
• describe your suitability for this area of work
• say when you can attend an interview
Dear Manager,
I am writing to you about the position of waiter and waitresses in your restaurant, I saw an advertisement in The Mirror on 15th June.
Presently, I am 22 years old and studying M.B.A at Brunel University. My college is only 3 working days that’s the reason I am looking for a part-time job to use my time and do some earning to pay off my expenses.
I have completed and passed an advanced certificate in food hygiene and am familiar with the provision of the catering industry. Previously I have worked for an Italian restaurant working as a waiter and was responsible for cashing up taking at the end of the day.
Moreover, I am very reliable and trustworthy, have a friendly, outgoing personality as well as enjoy dealing with the public. I am available for interviews from tomorrow onwards anytime except Mondays, Wednesday afternoons when I attend college. I would be grateful if I could be considered for this place. Additionally, I have attached my C.V also my cover letter with my contact details in the following attachment.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Sincerely,
Sana
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...tly, I am 22 years old and studying M.B.A at Brunel University. My college is onl...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...tly, I am 22 years old and studying M.B.A at Brunel University. My college is onl...
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Line 9, column 343, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...ace. Additionally, I have attached my C.V also my cover letter with my contact de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01896493944 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7211297896 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258238583407 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872395809764 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763064503175 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122417402886 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664877315282 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.