A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:•explain what you are currently doing•describe your suitability for this area of work•

Essay topics:

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.

Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:

• explain what you are currently doing

• describe your suitability for this area of work

• say when you can attend an interview

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in reference to the opening that was advertised in Times of India for the requirement of waitress in your local restaurant. I would like to apply for the post as my experience and personal qualities make me a deserving candidate.

Currently, I am studying hotel management in Delhi university. I want to take advantage of my summer holidays by working in the study-related area. I also had an experience of waitress in Bercos restaurant for 1 year. My responsibilities involved providing good quality service, managing customers’ orders, making sure that the customers get the orders on time and handling customers complaints.

I am reliable, trustworthy, hardworking and punctual, also I am flexible and can handle all sorts of task. My employer is happy to provide the reference and I will be available for interview any time. I am attaching my resume for your reference.

I look forward to meeting you soon

Yours Faithfully

Parul

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15527950311 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23979585002 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.995714067 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26458193196 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105026344555 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999139406199 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140240457797 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10430440981 0.0580467560999 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.