A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
• explain what you are currently doing
• describe your suitability for this area of work
• say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with the references to the advertisement posted in daily newspaper of job opening for restaurant waitresses/waiters.
I am 21 years of old, I am doing bachelor in Hotel Management. And I am looking for sweat able job for me; probably your restaurant will be my next destination. Currently, I am working in city restaurant as a waiter science last 6 months. Due to the some financial problem my owner will closing this restaurant soon. So I am searching a better job to helping my study.
Due to my study background and little working experience in related field, I will be the strongest candidate for this post. I am the quick learner and hard-working persons. My honesty and leaning attitude will be great assets for you company.
It would be great pleasure to be considering me for interview from you. I am available at 10am to 3 pm from Monday to Friday as I have to attend my classes after 3 Pm.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...aiter science last 6 months. Due to the some financial problem my owner will closing...
^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'close'
Suggestion: close
...he some financial problem my owner will closing this restaurant soon. So I am searching...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69491525424 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07010037211 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9072880253 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.25 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223953573981 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908590744488 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066198080334 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114917152345 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059041137471 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.