The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or
Nowadays, the demand of Peoples is very high. Likewise the need of vehicles over the world has been increasing day by day. As we can see at the following topic the first car appeared at UK road in 1888, and now the numbers of car has been over 29 millions.
According to me I am total agree with alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international law has been introduce to stop the numbers of car ownership. First of all the traffic over the world is out of control. The crowed of the vehicle is out of capacity of road excess basically underdevelopment countries. As a result it is very harmful for our environment too. The consumption of natural power sources like diesel petrol consuming high. Now days we can listen about vehicles reducing polices should be introduce in developing nations. It means they also think about alternative way of solving the transportation problem.
On the other hand, the increasing numbers of car has been stooping by introducing an international law over the ownership of vehicle. As we know region behind the vehicle increasing is level of people income capacity. If someone income thousands of dollar per months, he/she will definitely want to spend his/her money at luxuries product like car jeep. So that governing body should introduce those kinds of rules and regulation which can control these kinds of expenses. For example law should be one family maximum two vehicles only. On other way Vat Tax of these products should be high. And also introduce the time effective transport system, like bullet, tram and railway system, which is very effective transportation. It can carry too many passengers at a onetime quickly.
Over all I believed that some strict policies over the vehicle ownership can make the different to control the over crowed of cars and other transport services. Also thing about the alternatively way to solved the demands of transport, should be environment friendly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Likewise,
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...mbers of car has been over 29 millions. According to me I am total agree with alternative forms...
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Suggestion: introduced
...couraged and international law has been introduce to stop the numbers of car ownership. F...
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Message: Did you mean 'introduced'?
Suggestion: introduced
...out vehicles reducing polices should be introduce in developing nations. It means they al...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onal law over the ownership of vehicle. As we know region behind the vehicle incre...
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Suggestion: Also,
...d of cars and other transport services. Also thing about the alternatively way to so...
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...ved the demands of transport, should be environment friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, so, for example, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01226993865 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81854272107 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7183877642 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318129147809 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853661559776 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778826949226 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198858051656 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480152637927 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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