Some new employees have just joined your company to gain work experience. Write a letter to them and say– What work do you do?– What will they be doing on their first day at work?– What should a person bring along on the first day?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to let you know what is expected on the very first day of your training program.

I am a programmer analyst and supervisor, I am responsible to keep track of your learning progress. In addition to this, I will conduct an assessment by the end of the training to examine your learnings and you will be awarded the certificate based on your performance in the exam.

We will begin by looking at the work culture, type of work, technologies, tools, coding standards that are being used in the company. apart from all these, we will also talk about the company's mandatory rules and policies.

It's mandatory for you to bring the office ID card daily from the beginning of the training program and tap it when you enter in and go out of the office, also bring your technical certificates if you have any that will help us in selecting the suitable technology for your future assignments.

Feel free to write me your queries without any hesitation.

I look forward to meeting you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'examining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: examining
...n assessment by the end of the training to examine your learnings and you will be awarded ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...rds that are being used in the company. apart from all these, we will also talk about...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, apart from, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74316939891 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69411653563 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1678947273 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224212628886 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822638959913 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591016722413 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103514530674 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658707899929 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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