Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention that my widescreen television and microwave oven damaged badly while moving to my new apartment on Saturday, July 15.
Let me explain in details, I opted your so-called branded packers and movers service to shift my household item from 280 Wellesely, Downtown, Toronto to Unit-1802,545 Sherbourne Street, Toronto. I paid an extra fee to cover the insurance of electronic instruments such as Gitar, Desktop computer, Television, and other kitchen wares.
When I was unpacking the items, I found that my 42 inch LCD screen has got multiple scratches on it. It's a Sony Bravia generation 7 of 900$ CAD. Apart from this, the closing door of the microwave has damaged badly and I am not even able to use it to cook anything.
I was promised to deliver the goods without any damage but for extra precaution, I availed the high-end insurance premium of 150$ CAD from your company so I am expecting a full refund of the damaged television and microwave.
I have attached the packers and movers receipt along with the invoices of LCD and microwave.
Please look into the matter at your earliest.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...creen has got multiple scratches on it. Its a Sony Bravia generation 7 of 900$ CAD....
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$900'.
Suggestion: $900
...n it. Its a Sony Bravia generation 7 of 900$ CAD. Apart from this, the closing door...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$150'.
Suggestion: $150
...ailed the high-end insurance premium of 150$ CAD from your company so I am expecting...
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Line 9, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the damaged television and microwave. I have attached the packers and movers r...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93236714976 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74246404 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7680083734 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078197631918 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278858511563 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344342713 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404172584867 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389511900481 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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