Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Human living activities has been becoming immeasurably harmful to the natural world. As a result, there have been massive extinctions of numberous species of organisms. This essay will examine the main causes of loss of biodiversity and feasible measures of this obstacle.
The loss of the diversity of nature mainly boils down to two reasons. Firstly, the exponential growth of the human population is causing extinction by ruining natural habitats . In other words, overpopulation is one of the most pressing problems faced by our society, around the world, cities are becoming bustling, leading to the emergence of dirty slums that lack access to energy source, sanitation, and other basic human needs. Therefore, the demand of hunting, overharvesting, changing wetlands and forests to croplands and urban areas escalates. In the USA, for instance, thousands of square kilometres of forest which is home to hundreds of species of rare animal are destroyed for cultivation and construction. The second reason, linked to the first, is the alarming amount of carbon dioxide gas that are released from the burning of fossil fuels and vehicles. It is obvious that carbon footprint is the major cause of global warming which leads to the decrease of biodiversity. For example, ice melting at the North pole has made several kinds of polar bear died out.
Solving this issue entails altering the public’s mindset which can be done via awareness-raising activities through social media. Furthermore, individuals should have responsibility for protecting the environment and avoiding overexploitation. Another way to put the crisis under control is to promote public transport to curb the amount of CO2 gas.
In conclusion, the detrimental impact of human living activities in modern day is larger than ever, so changing the consciousness of people all over the world about the crisis is critical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36912751678 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02029466135 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654362416107 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1098205977 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156469290804 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457872372729 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424720437096 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800428694147 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044831945355 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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