In today's world advertisement play a critical role in the market. And every manufacturer spends a lot of money on advertising the products, in order to increase its sale. Although people's first priority in buying a product is its good quality, effective advertising can encourage individuals to buy a product that may not even need. And this is attributed to the person. Moreover, the advertisement introduces new products that can facilitate our lives.
If a product is not well made and sturdy, then good advertisement cannot help with selling it. It is self-evident that people do not want to waste money on shoddy goods. While effective advertising can persuade people to buy things that are not necessary for them. And that depends on the person's personality. Also, the person must be interested in the type of product, for example, I know one of my colleagues at work who is obsessed with electronic appliances, I remember he had waited in a queue for almost 5 hours to buy the newest iPhone as it came out. Also sometimes women are interested in clothing and care too much about their appearance when they see some specific clothes worn by celebrities, it really encourages them to buy those exact clothes.
Besides, these day's technology is improving so fast, every day there are new inventions, new ideas and new products which extremely improve our lives. And advertising is very much needed to popularize them. In order to show products that increase the quality of living and welfare.
All in all, buying or not buying, is people's choice, and as long as the advertisement can impact individuals decision-making process it can tempt us to buy more and more. Literally, it can either persuade people to buy unnecessary stuff or, introduce new products that improve our lives. In my opinion, both are correct on some level.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ssary for them. And that depends on the persons personality. The person must be interes...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o buy the newest iPhone as it came out. Also sometimes women are interested in cloth...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... those exact clothes. Besides, these days technology is improving so fast, every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 937.175257732 161% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98349834983 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89533949207 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 290.88556701 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4921688665 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322561692764 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890979510508 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623514147596 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187884715108 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200566009378 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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