Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience
Marriage is certainly an important and life-changing phase in a human’s life. Some people opine that
one should marry the love of his life, whereas others hold the notion that one should marry a rich
person for the sake of certainty in life. I am a strong advocate of the viewpoint that love is the
foundation of any marriage. In this essay, I will discuss both points of views.
There are several pros of a love marriage. First and foremost, a strong bonding and affection between
two different persons are the two most important pillars of a strong relationship, which is very much
prominent within an adorable couple. A human come across many ups and downs throughout his life.
During tough situations, a person always has a consistent emotional support system from his motivating
partner, that reduces the stress rate to half. Statistics have shown that the loneliness and unsuccessful
relationships are among the major reasons for depression. Subsequently, people madly in love
complement each other very well.
On the contrary, a marriage relying only on love may sometimes vanish when a couple couldn’t earn
enough money to manage their family needs such as paying bills or buying food. In such scenarios,
“marry for money” context seems to be appropriate.
To recapitulate, love is a strong and irreplaceable component of a healthy married life; however, money
is an important factor for sustaining the married life. In my opinion, each person should make their
independent vital contribution to financial expenses for the creation of a happy family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... complement each other very well. On the contrary, a marriage relying only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3203125 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96447059987 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3923382579 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.29896907216 395% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220917419146 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711591627451 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563631990114 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668297699337 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540875073573 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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